Proposed: To commit to a cause so deeply that you are willing to risk your life to support and sustain it
Final: To commit to a venture, cause, or to champion a way of life, even if it means personal risk.
Monday, 16 June 2008
47. Faith/Risk/Vision
Existing Online: To commit to a cause, or to champion a way of life, even if it may mean putting your life at risk
Proposed: To commit to a cause so deeply that you are willing to risk your life to support and sustain it
Final: To commit to a venture, cause, or to champion a way of life, even if it means personal risk.
Proposed: To commit to a cause so deeply that you are willing to risk your life to support and sustain it
Final: To commit to a venture, cause, or to champion a way of life, even if it means personal risk.
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I am not sure I understand the necessity of “putting your life at risk” seems a bit extreme and something most people would not honestly know until they were in an actual situation.
ReplyDeleteSuggestion: To commit to a cause, or champion a way of life, sometimes at personal risk.
How about
ReplyDeleteTo commit to a cause, or to champion a way of life, even if it may mean personal risk