Existing: The harmonious and energizing relationship of persons in a group that results in the group far surpassing (based on the summation of the abilities of its individual members) ability.
Suggestion: The harmonious and energizing relationship of persons in a group that results in the group far surpassing the sum of what could be achieved by all the individuals.
Rationale: simpler?
Final: The energising, creative relationship of people in a group which results in achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
Yes I think the new one is simpler.
ReplyDeletewhat if we left the type of relationship more general?
ReplyDeletebased on experiencing synergy with groups that have not been harmonious
my suggestion is
experiencing a group relationship that results in achievements far surpassing the sum of what could be achieved by all the individuals.
experiencing a group relationship that results in achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
ReplyDeleteexperiencing an energising group relationship that results in creative achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
ReplyDeleteThe energising, creative relationship of people in a group which results their achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
ReplyDeleteexperiencing results far surpassing the sum of individual contributions, by being a member of an energising, creative group
ReplyDeleteThe energising, creative relationship of people in a group which results in achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
ReplyDeleteThe energising, creative relationship of people in a group which results in achievements far surpassing the sum of individual contributions
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