Sunday, 24 August 2008

96. Relaxation/Renewal

existing
A diversion from physical or mental work which reduces stress and provides a balance of work and play as a means of realising your potential.

suggested
To unwind from physical or mental work in ways that give you a sense of calmness

New Label: Relaxation/Renewal Old Label: Relaxation

Final: To unwind from physical or mental work in order to reduce stress and renew energy, so you are better able to realise your potential.

4 comments:

  1. As I read over these original descriptors I cannot fail to notice personal bias of the creator and it makes me reflect on how my own biases are expressed unknowingly.

    That said...

    I suggest: To engage in activities that instill a sense of calm.

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  2. As this value sits in Service which may be (already has been?) renamed Self Actualisation is the "as a means of realising your potential" element of the original an important thing to keep in?

    The new suggestions just seem a lot thinner to me......

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  3. To unwind from physical or mental work in order to reduce stress and provide a balance of work and play so you are better able to realise your potential.

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  4. To unwind from physical or mental work in order to reduce stress and renew energy, so you are better able to realise your potential.

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