Monday, 3 March 2008

10. Care/Nurture

Existing online: To be physically and emotionally supported by family and friends throughout your life and to value the same for others.

Proposed: To be physically and emotionally supported by family and friends throughout your life and to value doing the same for others.

Rationale: adding 'doing the same for others' emphasises both the receiving and the giving of Care/Nurture.

Final: To be physically and emotionally supported by family and friends and to value doing the same for others.

2020

KVD: To be physically and emotionally supported by family and friends and to value doing the same for others.
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4 comments:

  1. Paul Chippendale7 March 2008 at 13:29

    I was wondering if "throughout your life" could be deleted?

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  2. Jackie8 March 2008 at 02:32

    I think "throughout your life" can be deleted - makes a very neat descriptor

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  3. RonaLynn Fitzpatrick9 March 2008 at 08:43

    Agree with deletion

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  4. dougal11 March 2008 at 08:04

    deleting 'throughout your life' works for me

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