Existing Online: The desire to have, or create a group of peers for the purpose of ongoing mutual support and the creative enhancement of each other.
Proposed: To have or create a cooperative groups of peers with shared values that provides mutual support and enhancement of each other.
Rationale: Does adding "shared values" help here?
Final: Community Support. To have, or to create, cooperative groups of peers with shared values that provide mutual support and enhancement of each other.
I confess to be a little confused by the intention of community/supportive and community/personalist values. they seem to overlap.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if it might be a problem to add "shared values" because it might be interpreted as "same".
How about...
To have or create a group of mutually supportive peers.
Suggestion:
ReplyDeleteTo have or create a group of peers, for the pupose of ongoing mutual support and the creative enhancement of each other.
Rationale:
dropping 'the desire' keeps to the criteria and the remainder of the current definition works well as is